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IN AT THE DEEP END

I found my doctor a little remote

as he checked my lungs

and checked my throat.

 

The trouble was the blinking screen

new guru of the live well scene,

it seemed to come between us

as he consulted comparison apps

 

I said I was recently prone to cramps

and suffering memory lapse.

The screen came in between us

as he searched for answers online

 

and, offering me a flu jab while

the engine ticked,

I felt my visit was a step too far

into a deep smooth -  sided jar

 

whose bottom not unlike my own

was bound to need checking for sediment

without a hint of sentiment,

now the seeds of doubt were sown.

◄ MARRIAGE VOWS

NIGHT ERRORS ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (13762)

Fri 7th Apr 2017 10:24

highly enjoyable - the comments too. Great stuff Ray.

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raypool

Sat 1st Apr 2017 17:28

Thanks Paul, happy motoring! On a serious note, I just wonder how many old crocs are running on too much medication , some to cancel out side effects . Lordy spare me..

Ray

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Paul Waring

Sat 1st Apr 2017 11:46

My doc tells me I need a full service and MOT. I think my engine is showing too much wear, I've started to rattle but, strangely, exhaust still works fine ?

Nice one Ray.

Paul

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raypool

Fri 31st Mar 2017 22:54

Bless you matey. Pure imagination this one. If it was real I probably wouldn't have written it!

Cheers David.

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