RHYMING ROCK

I am a stick of rock

with poetry running through,

many stories in my spine

telling me what to do.

 

Sticky sweetness of nectar too

bursting from my head

I am addicted to myself

to myself I must be true.

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◄ THE TIMES

THE LANES OF LONDON ►

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raypool

Wed 22nd Mar 2017 20:30

Suki, thanks for your comment. One of those weird ideas I sometimes get without being actually carted off by men in white coats.

Col: Another great clip, and a terrific musical ride Thanks!

Ray

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Wed 22nd Mar 2017 07:50

Ray - try the whole album on YouTube - just type in Wishbone Ash New England. Some terrific tracks. Always liked the rather enigmatic album cover.

good linkage from Stu too - haven't heard that track for yonks. Another great band.

Col

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suki spangles

Tue 21st Mar 2017 23:05

Intriguing stuff Ray. You evoked some interesting comments and feedback with this one too.

Suki

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raypool

Tue 21st Mar 2017 21:46

Thanks , Stu, appreciate it and am altogether intrigued about the Lorelei connection. It seems like a big compliment , and I am in esteemed company!

Ray

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Stu Buck

Tue 21st Mar 2017 18:13

brilliant ray. as for lorelei, i can only think of this;

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3diz8I0AVVk

from one of my favourite bands.

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raypool

Tue 21st Mar 2017 11:54

HI David, you pose a physical/metaphysical question - in order to answer I must resort to self cannibalism. Just a matter of taste.

Thanks elP an intriguing parallel there. I am thinking "mermaid" myth connecting with the sea ( where you buy the rock). Hope that meets you half way!

Old Shoes, well spotted, the poem was a sort of trip in a way. No offense, and thanks for troubling.

Colin - what a great track - sends me into more thinking. That's the beauty of comments like yours, often a challenge.

Ray

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Mon 20th Mar 2017 08:28

elP mentioning Lorelei reminded me of this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZGys3RfRog

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New Shoes

Mon 20th Mar 2017 06:59

I hope no one takes offense to this, but I think its a really good trip if you know what I mean.

elPintor

Mon 20th Mar 2017 00:07

"Lorelei is a feminine water spirit, similar to a siren or mermaid, which is rumored to send sailors to their death, by luring them near cliffs with her beautiful singing voice..
Lorelei, a rock in the Rhine River, the subject of many legends, poems, and songs"

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lorelei_(disambiguation)

elP

--the first thing that came to mind...

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