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Coffee Mugs

Our love is made of coffee mugs,

A house that isn’t big enough,

And all these happy, autumn thoughts;

When you are here with me.

 

Our love is fire, slow with need,

A never-aging willow tree,

And here is where I’ll never leave;

When you are here with me.

 

Our love is necessary air,

A spark that makes judgment impaired,

It’s a perfect little love affair;

When you are here with me.

 

Our love is fading, burning out,

A candle flame under a cloud,

My insides are breaking, screaming out;

When you are here with me.

 

Our love has went and walked away,

A gypsy gone before mid-day,

My mouth now has nothing to say;

Except that you aren’t here.

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Raj Ferds

Tue 14th Mar 2017 07:21

Hi Rachel, I didn't expect that finale. But the way life is the old coffee mug will be replaced with a new one. I hope.

Nice one.
Raj x

Sylvie

Tue 14th Mar 2017 06:21

Oh my goodness. I did not see that coming. I was settling in for a cute love story. Heartbreaking. Well done. ?

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