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traveler (la revancha)

forward running

pulling threads from

mother's skirt

 

to me, she shows

her secrets

 

and from her

I keep mine...

 

 

 

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elPintor

Wed 22nd Feb 2017 12:33

Ahh--iniquity..when you aren't born onto a level playing field, it's all you can expect without disappointment.

Thanks for commenting, David.

elP

elPintor

Wed 22nd Feb 2017 01:45

Hey, Stu..thanks so much for all of your comments on my recent writings. I kept this one brief because I haven't had a whole lot to say lately--or maybe because I can't seem to find enough slack in my jaw to tell it like it is.

Either way, I'm really glad for your reading..take care, Stu!

elP

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Stu Buck

Tue 21st Feb 2017 11:16

brilliant! so simple, so brief but stays with the reader. clever, i love it!

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