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Hopes & Fears

Hopes & Fears

 

November ’08 - I saw

The arrival of a new hope;

A glimmer in a dim-lit world;

A man to walk the tightrope

That spans between the folk

Of multi-coloured hue,

With differing ideologies

And diversity of view.

 

For every man that has a hope,

Another man has none.

For every man that has a fear,

There must be this someone

Who’ll turn around that fear,

And allow that man to trust

That, from this day forth,

Promises won’t turn to dust.

 

There’s many people fear

The overwhelming ballot,

Could easy be expunged

By way of speeding bullet.

 

There’s many people fear their:-

Influence, (now diminished),

Oppression, (now at an end),

Control, (their rule), is finished.

 

Perhaps a looming menace

To this latest ‘great white hope,’

Won’t come from gun or bullet,

But that he may not cope

With a world, as it is,

Waiting for resolve to crack,

And fair-weather friends hiding,

Knives sharpened for attack.

 

I fear the supreme threat

May be failure to achieve.

With expectation undelivered,

How would failure be received?

 

And should the dream be gone,

With all the promised transformation?

What appetite for soured dreams?

What’s left a disaffected nation?

                            Resignation?

                               Alienation?

                            Indignation?

                         Condemnation?

                          Conflagration!!

 

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Nichola Burrows

Mon 21st Sep 2009 10:57

Hi steve, as I was one of those who followed the Obama election with morbid interest, I mirror your sentiments on this. There was a foreboding conviction held by many that overshadowed the whole proceedings, one that maybe I think will continue indefinately - people are shallow and fickle creatures and power always hangs precariously in the balance, and the stanza, 'how would failure be recieved?' draws on this and juxtaposes the hope and the foreboding, and balances the continuity not only of the poem but also the ongoing fear of many, and interest of others on the future of this man who holds so much power in his hands.

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Dave Bradley

Sun 20th Sep 2009 21:36

Hi Steve

Sorry I haven't commented before - been away with family in Glasgow. Totally agree with the sentiments. He's still walking that knife edge isn't he, and (more important) still alive!!!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 19th Sep 2009 16:57

It is a good idea. I'm glad you followed through. It has thoughts worth sharing.

steve mellor

Fri 18th Sep 2009 16:12

Until I re-read this I hadn't realised that I'm in ....ation mode again.This was written just after Obama's election, having seen the election right up to the final day of the vote, during a stay in Ohio.Not the greatest, but a good idea by Dave (backed by Nicky)Steve M.

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