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Losing interest

(This is a satirical poem on increased dependence of the internet in the past decade or so.)

 

Some years ago,

I would open a book,

Regardless of width, regardless of breadth,

I would read as by the hours played,

And without a break, none would be left,

I would finish it that very day.

 

But now that I'm older,

So much has changed,

I can't find the passion, I can't find the motive,

To, so obsessedly, read them now,

No more and no less busy or active,

But forgotten what some of my favourites were about.

 

Now agitated and confused,

How did it happen?

Losing joy in losing interest,

I try to recover what has gone,

Trying my very best,

To recall what I might have done

 

I can't recall a thing,

That may have pushed my books aside,

I rack my brains to think what I might have missed,

Then I turn on my computer and load up wiki,

Suddenly it strikes me that that is where the answer is,

Who'd turn pages when the same data takes just a few clicks to see?

 

 

 

 

 

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 5th Oct 2009 11:53

Joshua, I don't think you should have to qualify your poem by explaining what it is, or what it is trying to do. A good poem speaks for itself. A background of circumstances is another thing entirely. One recent ' performance reader' spent four times longer explaining a poem than the poem itself - a five-liner, which just got lost in too much word 'stuff'.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 15:26

You have a major point. Even as young as you are, technology is outstripping your own experience, and a new language is emerging, make no mistake. But it is robotic, lacking in beauty. So, the definition of 'beauty' has to change - once again in 2009. Thank goodness the idea of 'beauty' is adaptable, like people.

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Cate Greenlees

Sun 20th Sep 2009 20:52

Certainly food for thought......
Cate xx

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