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Goodwill & The Mountain

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The Top

 

Milky Way lights to tell me the city has passed

Urban drumbeats, overflowing mind now miscast

One sided & demanding cold & unforgiving

Any mountain seduces with disbelieving 

 

The Middle

 

Mountains & hardship always encourage humanity

Commeradery, unselfishly giving with mental impunity 

A counterattack on what's unimportant, what's hollow

A way to give back when running to follow

 

I enjoy dropping the fake western world of taking

I know it's not the same, I can return, but I'm not mistaken 

Being grounded is solid footing of the heart & mind

Tolerance on both sides need to be realigned 

 

The Bottom

 

Neutral sounds fill nothing  & everything with empathy

Birds, running water, cicada all share sympathy 

A smiling lady named Goodwill, says hi 

Dark skinned, brown eyed, she says bye.

 

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Jeff

Tue 7th Feb 2017 14:36

Thanks Suki....Jeff

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suki spangles

Tue 7th Feb 2017 13:00

This would work great as a song lyric. Nice one!

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Jeff

Mon 6th Feb 2017 10:52

Hi Paul.
All done climbing (we took the hard route) & just enjoying a few more days in Africa. The 20 of us raised a little short of 80k for various charities. As always visiting developing countries is humbling & I always take fond memories, nothing more. Thanks for the comments.......Jeff....

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Paul Waring

Mon 6th Feb 2017 08:59

Hi Jeff, I like this.

Not sure if you're still on your trip, so hope it's either going or went fantastically well!

Paul

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