call to nature

The call to nature was loud and clear

relief from the pressures of this time he pleas

he searched for solidarity in his haste

his needs would soon be met, the time is here

he crouched upon the seen, familiar though different

an amber essence  water fall surges though its confinements

an emminse thunder crackles through the porcilin scape

a slow motion free fall

 an emanent splash awaits in the pool below

 the terrain now dampened 

waiting in contemplation

his need soon fulfilled

all things evident now washed away


he exits the men's room



◄ young and old

movement ►


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lynn hahn

Fri 10th Feb 2017 18:54

It did take a re-read for me too. That is great! Thank you for visiting my profile. Glad you did so I could come visit yours.

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Randall Eckstein

Sun 5th Feb 2017 14:11

The pleasure is all in the re-read! Love it!

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Raj Ferds

Sun 5th Feb 2017 11:56

Oh shit, I love it old shoes.
You must be relieved now that you've released that analogy!!


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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Sun 5th Feb 2017 10:54

Hehe - light treatment of the common need we all have - glad I'm not cleaning the stains... ? Best wishes, Dave

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