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Thanatos

 

 

He's there again,

that shadow.

Waiflike

wings and floating

from one to the other,

awaiting the final expiration,

and grasp a solitary soul.

 

In multitudes they hover.

Vacant eyes,

 like washed out skies.

Once vibrant

but humble now.

No remnant

of where or how

or when.

Or even why?

 

I see him there,

a shadow,

not grim or menacing,

and I know

  I'm not seeing things.

A spectre

 cast upon a wall

just waiting,

for a humble soul.

 

Someday

He'll come for us

and we'll stare,

 with the vacant eyes

of washed out skies

and wait

till the time is right

to say our last goodbye.

◄ Catharsis

Reign Of Terror ►

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 18th Sep 2009 15:39

this is weird. He was flying around my pen the other day and wondered whether to write a poem about Thanatos. should i still?
Beautiful: vacant eyes of washed out skies.
I agree with janet, and the story sees him becoming a more of a peaceful plummet rather than a violent death.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 17th Sep 2009 17:07

I scoff at nothing, and greatly appreciate the mystical or metaphysics which transcends all structured religions. This has a finely woven mood. The 'vacant eyes of washed out skies' is superb. I stumbled on the lines once or twice, but not enough to break the overall flow.

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Thu 17th Sep 2009 14:48

I'm with Dave all the way on this one.
I thoroughly enjoy reading this kind of poetry, it resonates with my spiritual working side.
Lovely imagery throughout. (lovely to my mind that is, others might be afraid to see these things)

Janet.x

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Dave Bradley

Thu 17th Sep 2009 10:16

Another fascinating philosophical offering Nicky, with last line perhaps the most provocative of all.

It may be a big hello as well as a goodbye

"Our birth is but a sleep and a forgetting:
The Soul that rises with us, our life's Star,
Hath had elsewhere its setting,
And cometh from afar:
Not in entire forgetfulness,
And not in utter nakedness,
But trailing clouds of glory do we come
From God, who is our home"

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