F.A. Haiku

Urges and surges

Jealous lunges and plunges

Fatal attraction

◄ A Rose-Tinted Spectacle

When I Go ►


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Paul Waring

Sun 29th Jan 2017 09:30

Cor Col, good morning and aythangyow for your advice, you are exactly right. I've now changed the title. Will the usual 25 guinea fee suffice?!

Once again, many thanks for taking the time to read and make constructive comments. I'm glad you liked it. Cheers, Paul

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sun 29th Jan 2017 08:48

Think I would have called this F.A. Haiku to leave a gap in the interpretation defense. Nice one regardless. Col.

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