What's mine's mine.

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This poem lacks character, she muttered.

To be honest the sentences were a bit ropey and the thoughts clangy.

Actually it was a bit a bit long-winded. Took ages to read. Ugh!

I like the way it began life but then it lost me.

Inane and vacuous; what’s the point?

Hey you, that’s my poem.

Get off my property you!

◄ Ever been to that sacred place inside you?

Life's blue-eyed boy ►

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Raj Ferds

Thu 26th Jan 2017 17:20

wink, wink

<Deleted User> (13762)

Thu 26th Jan 2017 16:43

Kerpow! Shots fired! 😳

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