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Lonestars

Small, bright sparkles on the sky,

number of distance way too high.

Too long to reach, too hard to find,

their lonely souls and loving mind.

 

The only leaf on river floats, 

his sorrow speaks some quiet notes.

If you would listen carefully...

the wind will sing, leaf miss the tree. 

 

This little proofs of solitude,

can perfectly describe my mood. 

I'm not a stone, I don't ask much,

what lonestars need is just some touch. 

 

◄ Free Catastrophe

I do and will miss you ►

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FruFru

Sun 5th Feb 2017 21:17

Tnx Ruvi ?❤

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Ruvi Galhena

Sun 5th Feb 2017 13:40

Good one Gaja

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FruFru

Sat 14th Jan 2017 09:04

Tnx xd hahah I meant leaf. Cause I had this picture in my head about the lonely leaf on the river. Grammar mistake I guess...

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Sat 14th Jan 2017 01:09

Love it
However, I wonder if you meant to write lief or life in the first line of the second stanza?

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