Starters Orders
The waves, stretched out across the bay,
Race towards the holidaymakers
Shaking their frilly white knickers
And screaming with laughter
Comments
Thanks for commenting. The title was originally 'saucy postcard' but it was a more long-winded poem that included double D cup buttresses and a pregnant harbour wall and a damp patch on the Beach!
Bang on Hazel and as Cynthia says, has a double edged dimension . So immediate and humorous it cheers up the whole website. Sort of reminds me of the old saucy postcards, still clinging on apparently.
Ray
Delightful. I really like how the lines could be about either the waves or the holiday makers. Your choice of words is splendid.
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Fri 13th Jan 2017 09:09
Now you've tempted us with your 'double D cup buttresses and a pregnant harbour wall and a damp patch on the Beach!' I feel you just have to post the long-winded version!