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Don't

Don't try to guide me, or

show me the way between

Heaven and Hell

 

I have been there before,

seen what Heaven has to offer, and

felt the burning flames of Hell.

 

 

So I  ask you once again

Please! don't try to guide me

I will get there by myself.

◄ Memoirs

Seen it all. ►

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<Deleted User> (6484)

Wed 9th Sep 2009 20:59

Thanks Cate.
Bernie

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Cate Greenlees

Wed 9th Sep 2009 19:48

So did I. Very succinct!
Cate xx

<Deleted User> (6484)

Tue 8th Sep 2009 16:41

Thanks Cynthia.
Bernie

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 8th Sep 2009 15:16

Short, universal and impactive. I really like it.

P.S. Pop an 'h' on to 'as' in line 5.

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