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RETAIL RISE AND FALL

The decline of Woolworths was swift and sure

our local one went dark after Christmas

Santa took the goods away

with his airborne overview and sleigh.

 

The frontage remained like a broken tooth

patched with forthcoming paper events

the stainless steel doors locked and barred

its reputation feathered and tarred.

 

Then whispers went round of a new kid in town

an impossibly posh emporium

with Italian fittings and German kitchens

sumptuous towelling and silken robes

 

a curving staircase was fitted and lit

ascending to paradise in a dream of luxury

where not so very long ago

Woolies sold pullies and the ceilings were low

 

The sense of awe in the shiny store

was palpable and curious

but after a year the signs were back

and the lights went out, the store went black.

 

The next great incarnation came

in the retail guessing game

and as I write the tills of Poundland

ring loud and clear just as Santa planned.

◄ JUDGE RINDER

THE OLD KENT ROAD ►

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raypool

Thu 24th Nov 2016 17:35

Thanks Colin for the social extra dimension so apt for this poem. What I found fascinating is the contrast of aspirations in the building. Apparently M & S wanted the space but presumably were elbowed out by the ching ching boys, who knows? Your utopian vision would be great with a few twists of arms.
Thanks Stu, I have spent about three pounds in there in the last year, so consider that quite an outlay.
Things are good thanks, now over the cold!

Ray

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Stu Buck

Thu 24th Nov 2016 14:59

brilliant ray. my poundland does pick n mix so im happy but i understand the sentiment! a sing song piece with a really dark message. hope you are well.

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Thu 24th Nov 2016 08:00

nice one Ray - with online shopping and out of town malls these behemoth high street stores seem to have been left behind and somehow have no place in the modern day shopping experience. Mine's a B&M Bargains - never been in it and probably never will. These stores are all a false economy sucking the last pennies from the poor in the belief they are getting a bargain.

I don't miss Woolies. But I blame the council for sky high rents and the lack of vision in not repurposing these big buildings. We need at least one in the centre of every town, subdivided into small retail outlets for local artists, artisans, craftfolk, producers etc. Bring back the nation of shopkeepers in all their local splendour. Well that's my great scheme.

cheers mate.

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