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HOW TO BE DEAD

 

I'm cool about it

but decide to hang around.

Everyone's so sad,

there's a chandelier of tears in the sky,

cars wipe their eyes

and streets hide their faces.



I'm cool about it

but smell almonds.

It's weird seeing myself

dressed in waistcoat and tux

lying in a coffin

and my face being shaved of three days growth.



I'm cool about it

but overhear friends say

I was an ordinary person

doing a demanding job

with skill and expertise

while others said I was just a criminal.



I'm cool about it

but now everything fades

in this new this new gig

that's a rim of silence,

a dreamless sleep, a broken

wi-fi connection or obsolete software.



◄ WHAT THE HOROSCOPE SAYS

JERRY SADOWITZ ►

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winston plowes

Thu 17th Sep 2009 20:33

Hi Rodney
Interesting subject... Liked the repeating line and especially liked the lines
cars wipe their eyes
and streets hide their faces.
Winston

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Sat 5th Sep 2009 12:40

This is such a good idea I am going to steal it. Gentlemen, we have boat drinks

<Deleted User> (5646)

Sat 5th Sep 2009 11:03

A chandelier of tears in the sky. Great line and imagery. I enjoyed reading the whole thing.
Tell me Rodney, have you ever had an out of body experience?

Janet.x

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