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DOGGING

In the world of dogging

there must be variations on a theme

corruption in a blind man's dream

and where the shot semenĀ 

casts its seed to the wind

that's where we'll find a semblance

of truths however unpalatable

where the seeds of sorrow

bring on another unforgiving tomorrow

◄ THE ARCADE

JUDGE RINDER ►

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raypool

Mon 21st Nov 2016 16:05

Always happy to oblige Rose. I just can't believe how unromantic a word dogging is.

Colin, just to get the atmosphere, of course. Authenticity is all - but do you think I could get my wife to come along?

Ray

<Deleted User> (13762)

Mon 21st Nov 2016 14:07

did you undertake much research for this one Ray?

<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 21st Nov 2016 13:59

love the pun Ray.





Rose

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raypool

Sun 20th Nov 2016 23:36

cheers Rose. That line would have been a little "tacky" in a manner of speaking. THanks for reading and enjoying.

Ray x

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sun 20th Nov 2016 12:52

Ray,I was expecting the inclusion of 'oh cum all ye faithful'
considering the approach of yuletide.

Great poem.


Rose

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