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Silent Songs of Understanding

He sings, no,

hums, or maybe

whispers a song.

No. It's dead silent.

But it is a song that I don't know, 

it is almost a foreign language,

there is no sound other than the song of understanding.

He looks at me with my head in my hands, quivering lip, glistening eyes, fighting drops of sadness,

and touches the side of his nose.

Secret code, I nod. Yes, I need to talk.

He points and we get up and leave, 

we didn't say a word, nobody else could understand

anything we said,

not even his girlfriend. Because it was silent.

She looks at him as we walk away and he mouths "I'm sorry".

She knows he will be back, but I think she is hurt.

I didn't want to hurt anyone, I just need help.

And he is the only one who can carry the silent tune of understanding.

 

The stage is dark as we walk on, and there's no one else there.

He folds me in his arms and I spill over.

My head is in his hands, my lip is no longer quivering, it is shaking with sobs, and I don't fight the tears.

And we stand.

His mouth is by my ear and I can hear him. 

He has a lovely voice.

He is singing, no,

humming, or maybe

whispering a song.

No. It's dead silent.

But it is the silent song of understanding.

 

And I know he cares.

◄ Lonely Dancer

Comments

Claire

Wed 2nd Nov 2016 16:34

Half of the time I write, I write quickly and just pour, so I have no clue what was going through my mind most of the time. I don't think it is a mirror, though.

As for "Oh, Q", 'he' in this poem is 'Q' in the other one. They are very connected. The 'Lonely Dancer' in "Lonely Dancer" is 'Q' as well. Most of my poems are just me blabbing about my social life.

<Deleted User> (13762)

Wed 2nd Nov 2016 09:06

a beautiful study of friendship

lovely title

I wonder should there be a break / gap after the first 7 lines as these seem to mirror the last section and from 'He looks at me...' is stepping back to before that point? I may be reading this wrong in which case I apologise.

I assume there are connections with Oh, Q? I'm reading your entries backwards!

thanks for posting.

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