With You, Our First

Plymouth to Dartmouth, rail & boat, we dated first,

Sailed you down, then into town,

Judy Spiers doggie turn,

Spiers of the cathedral, so inspired inside, Christian beauty devined,

Prosecco garden break, strawberries infused on our date.

How we enjoyed the day,

Italiano Totnesio, our first meal togethio, watching downward carnival.

Half birthday cake, surprised you on this romantic break,

Train bound,

First kiss home.

Oh desperate for second turn.

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◄ Can't Wait to see you Tomorrow.

Bake Off - Bog Off ►

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Neil Clark

Wed 26th Oct 2016 08:01

Absolutely. Deliberate curios and in jokes. "Judi Spiers Doggie Turn" she presented a mini pet show for local Dartmouth residents. Lol. As bizarre as the lucid innuendo. I can assure you. But thank you for the comment. V.much appreciated.

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Colin Hill

Tue 25th Oct 2016 19:27

a curious little poem with lots of little in-jokes? Leaves the reader a little confused or curious? I get the Devon Riviera touches but Judy Spiers doggie turn?

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