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Write Out Loud!

 

 

"Write out loud!"

He said.

"But, how?"

I asked,

A million thoughts

running through my head!

 

Of complicated structure,

rhymes that I thought

could fracture,

my fragile human skull.

 

" It doesn't matter.

Just write."

He said.

"Only you, know the things

that are in your head."

 

"But what about the heart?"

I asked.

"Just spill the emotion

from the heart,"

he said,

"but don't forget to use your head."

 

" You'll find a place

where you can start,

whether it's from the mind

or from the heart.

You'll know."

He said.

 

And maybe, if you're good

you'll be remembered

when you're dead."

◄ Lilley

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Nichola Burrows

Wed 2nd Sep 2009 01:17

sorry that was supposed to say "the masters'" and not 'he masters'.. Amazing that missing out one single letter in a word can totally change the context and meaning of what is written.

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Nichola Burrows

Wed 2nd Sep 2009 00:55

Who knows Cate, the most famous artists and poets ( stress on the most ) are no longer with us, and he masters only reached fame after death. So our contributions may be famous one day. Who knows!? We probably won't.x

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Cate Greenlees

Wed 26th Aug 2009 23:15

Yes I like this too Nicky. Not sure how many of us will be remembered when we`re dead for our poetry though!!
Cate xx

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Dave Bradley

Tue 25th Aug 2009 08:14

I like it too Nicky and have been interested by what you've said in the Discussion thread, which must be linked.

Does it work to sit down and say "OK I'm going to create a poem"? Or do we need something inside us which demands to be written down, at least as a starting point?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 24th Aug 2009 18:40

And you're right. After you 'ideas dump', then comes the discipline of sharpening them to fine ideas worth sharing and remembering. But no one can teach the initial insights that have to 'hit the paper' or 'the screen' in their rough form.
This poem is clever, and punchy.

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