tracker
..spent my blood like money
and left me to linger
like a beat dog
pacing a length of chain
without seeing
I know what you've done
your purchase lies
smothered inside
a plastic shopping bag.
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elPintor
Wed 21st Sep 2016 02:29
Thanks, all..offline for a few days. To tell the truth, most times when I write I couldn't put what I'm thinking into more succinct terms. To see to know to sense is one thing--to verbalize and transfer to others is another.
elP
another nice bit of literary intrigue with a good send off line.
I can see the many forks of your thinking here (I hope) elP. There is always the fragile construct that hangs in the mind and threatens to disappear. A rare quality . I can visualize a drug fix with all the paraphernalia.
Ray
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elPintor
Thu 22nd Sep 2016 00:52
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9KkJAsB9rQI