Silent & Cold
This poem came about when I was just playing around trying to use just three words to a line. I'd appreciate any feedback you guys have on it! Let me know what you think:
Silent and cold
Chills the bones
Freezes the blood
Unsettles the soul
Harries the mind
Wailing and shrieking
Harridan voices calling
Keening, crying, weeping
Sanity’s requiem keeping
The dead dance
The Damned waltz
And God plays
The maddening flute
Over and over
Until the last
When we advance
To the grave
No longer dancing
No longer wailing
Silent and cold
<Deleted User> (6484)
Mon 17th Aug 2009 16:04
Interesting piece Steven and credit to you for trying something differant, might give that a go myself.
one minor, minor crit, first line, silent and cold or silence and cold???
Bernie