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so this is the twenty first century

i am witnessing my mum lose her mind over email

each of us pour like cheap poster paint over the canvas of our daily lives

seeping into the nebulous cracks and depressing pits of routine

i have two tranquilizers left but three days until payday

the last novel i read portrayed a society a hundred years from now

where technology had become sentient and taken over

and we were mere slaves

slaves in factories creating parts for the machines

we once housed in factories to make parts for us

 

like ouroboros, humanity ate itself

 

we take pictures of the dead

with ever smaller cameras

 

◄ the destruction of small ideas

haicoup ►

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Stu Buck

Wed 17th Aug 2016 22:55

i have read that and doors of perception many times. i love a bit of aldous, his first ever novel chrome yellow is a classic as well.

elPintor

Wed 17th Aug 2016 22:05

If you like Orwell, you would like Brave New World by Aldous Huxley..

You may have read it already but it seems very fitting to the piece here. Huxley announces great (and several decades old) theories that we wouldn't necessarily have to be coerced through brutality to accept enslavement to dictatorship and that humans will gladly take ease over revolution if they are distracted enough by inconsequential matters (ie gadgets?)..truly brilliant foresight.

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Stu Buck

Tue 16th Aug 2016 00:05

well cheers all! im glad my rampant orwellian miserableness struck a chord.

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raypool

Mon 15th Aug 2016 23:22

Compelling stuff, Stu. Shades of J G Ballard in a dystopian world. The pointlessness of material worship
is in dollops of paint, a headless stump of Orwell and a ring road to nowhere come to me.

Ray

The 19th Floor

Mon 15th Aug 2016 20:09

I want to dip my brush in line three.

elPintor

Sun 14th Aug 2016 23:07

Super clever title that fits very well..a sort of conspicuous consumption gone obviously and predictably awry.

elP

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