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would you meet my family

would you like them

would you wear my clothes and paint my nails 

would you scream at me.  roll your eyes 

would you cry with me. over me 

would you grow. learn. feel safe 

would you tell me if you don't 

would I lie to you baby would I lie to you

would we be friends

would you dream about us 

would you make plans 

would you mean them

would you be happy

would I 

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Yvette Pauley

Sat 30th Jul 2016 07:07

Thank you! I realised part way through that it was sounding a bit like the Charles and Eddie song so snuck a line in there for fun

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Martin Elder

Tue 26th Jul 2016 23:09

This has a great feel and its own natural pace. It almost feels like it should be a song. Nice one

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