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dear sun, thanks for everything. love everyone.

and in the back of every car and the pocket of every coat there is a flask

full of light and the light tastes good like hope and the light tastes bitter

because with hope comes expectation and with expectation comes the

realisation that not everything is going to work out perfectly every time

some things may not work out at all but for those times when the light

is bitter we can quench our need for sweet tasting hope by looking around

at the world and at the trees and at the beetles and our family and friends

and turn off the screens and the news and bask in the thick, buttery waves

of excellence that beam down from our one true god, the sun, every day and

now is the time when we take our light and we drink deep of its perfect storm.

◄ i cant take you tonight but i will be back for you so pack a bag

we're going to need a bigger boat ►

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Stu Buck

Fri 22nd Jul 2016 22:09

thanks! i swing from aching to despair to moments of pure hope, as most people do, and i find the two primal states - light and dark - love and hate - call them what you will, are the best starting points for poetry. it may highlight a lack of subtlety perhaps but more and more i am interested in highlighting these two polar opposites.

elPintor

Fri 22nd Jul 2016 21:37

this is great..light isn't always welcome when we've become accustomed to dark, but it always shows the truth..maybe our eyes just need adjustment along with our perspective..you convey a synesthetic conception of seeing as a sense and it is very effective in conveying contrasts.

elP

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