shapeless clouds coalesce into familiar forms
before night gives light to stars aligned
windowless indescript white vans travel
in caravans sprouting antennae like weeds
radio sputters clicks like some mobile Geiger counter
and I am pacing back and forth above a stormfront
that gathers swiftly to the south
Just to say I agree with Stu elP. Almost intangible yet real for the imaginative free mind to conceive, so an envious achievement.
Ray
great stuff. what i love about your writing is its so vague, it seems to exist on the fringes of a dream that one can barely remember. you work in mood and imagery which is a great talent. i find myself having to be so specific most of the time because i lack the intrinsic skills needed to convey emotion through abstract forms like you do. its quite lovely.
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elPintor
Fri 22nd Jul 2016 00:44
Wow..very generous comments from the both of you. I'm pretty pleased that I could express any meaning at all to anyone else other than me.
Much thanks, Ray and Stu,
elP