Broken Heart
Shoes lost its ropes
The birds lost their wings
Time was so less to decide
Silence fills my days
My mind slumped into a dark corner
I thought you were healing me, but
you broke my heart into million pieces
I look so happy on the outside, but
I was so mess inside
You said you love me, but
you dated her once again
You said you will stay with me forever
Forever is shit
It is just an illusion
Now I leave you without a sound
_deasemooie_
Big Sal
Tue 7th Aug 2018 16:52
Powerful emotion . . .If I may offer a suggestion? If you're not up for editing a 2 year old poem though I completely understand. .I think in the first stanza if you put 'lose' instead of 'lost', it would better fit the flow of the piece.
Like I said though, no harm in keeping old poems the way they are to look back on and improve oneself in the future. Good job on all your work thus far.?