borealis haiku

pitch black northern sky

neon watercolour bruise

a signal from god.

◄ loss (tanka)

inter arma enim silent leges ►

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Stu Buck

Sun 10th Jul 2016 12:30

an interesting take no less. glad i have stoked the fires in such few words.

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raypool

Sun 10th Jul 2016 12:12

I like this Stu. Interestingly I have a railway signal in mind against a night sky - a fond image for me. A haiku should fire up the imagination and that you've done.

Ray

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