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That strange twinkle in your eyes--

 

the inescapable gravity

upon which your gaze is fixed

has drawn your light beyond you,

 

and now the blinking glimmer

that shines within your widening black pupil

is only the reflection of another star that's falling.

narcissismdistorted self-image

◄ vestige

children of the deity ►

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elPintor

Sat 9th Jul 2016 04:06

Thanks to all..I really do get a kick out your comments..truly, its a pleasure to know that we remain unfixed from any dictated point of commonality in interpretation. It's a good part of what drew me to posting on this site in the first place.

elP

ps
I really like that attitude, Stu.."that hasn't stopped me in the past"..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r80HF68KM8g

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raypool

Fri 8th Jul 2016 21:27

Bewitching and compelling with a hint of something unattainable. Clever twist of observation.

Ray

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Stu Buck

Fri 8th Jul 2016 16:56

speaks to me of jumping off a building. might be way off the mark but i usually am and that hasnt stopped me in the past. its oddly beautiful, well done.

elPintor

Fri 8th Jul 2016 12:51

Too funny, David..I know the feeling, believe me.

elP

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