Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

sorry for the violence

For I thought I was a flower was it I who set your soul on fire

◄ karma

hiding under faces ►

Comments

Profile image

Stu Buck

Fri 1st Jul 2016 18:59

this is an excellent example of micro-poetry. in one line, you pack as much punch and story as many longer poems.

i'd love to see this with a line break though

For I thought I was a flower,
Was it I who set your soul on fire

for me, its perfect poetry.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message