Unslept
Like your side of the bed
Unslept, uncreased.
Wondering where you've been
My face too is unslept
Comments
Whilst I like the play on the word unslept I don't think it's a very pleasing word. A lovely snippet though. Almost Japanese in its brevity.
Nice work, Preeti. And proof a lot can be said in a very few words.
A small but affecting poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Preeti Sinha
Tue 14th Jun 2016 08:37
Thanks! Graham, I hate unslept too!