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The Blue Haired Girl & The Smooth Coated Tiger

The Blue Haired Girl & The Smooth Coated Tiger

You are carefully unfolded out from yourself
the blue haired girl with a sparkler for a tongue,

you are sprawled out beneath the full moon
the smooth coated Tiger with a roaring voice.

These are merely the two sides of the blue you
opened before me, but my magic is too weak
my skin too precious, I must close you up and

practice harder poetry, before I venture nearer
to your spirit's origami, in case my paper cuts
go too deeply into you, or friendship bled dry.

For once and for all the ways there are
I stand to care beyond my carefulness,

minds open and close but freed love stays fixed
the way a star sits in the centre of a Tiger's eye.


John G.Hall(C)2009

◄ Septembers Birth

Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Tue 4th Aug 2009 11:31

I've read this a few times and i do like it, especially the reference to the tiger's eye at the end. I can relate to the properties of a tiger eye banded crystal.

Janet.x

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