shudder
at midnight, crouching,
behind the light
passing through this open door..
if haste doesn't kill me, this hesitation will.
the figures moving
beyond my sight,
only visions recurring
in shadows of things
remaining to be seen.
Comments
Lynn Hamilton
Sat 14th May 2016 21:12
Evening E
The line 'if haste doesn't kill me, this hesitation will' stood out for me.
Lynn x
elPintor
Sat 14th May 2016 10:06
Hey there, David,
Some things are definitely difficult to convey. Maybe more so when there exists reticence because of their unpleasantness.
Thanks for commenting..you're always welcome.
elP
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elPintor
Sat 14th May 2016 22:07
Hey, Lynn,
This idea is definitely central. It is almost as the question to move forth and confront conflict or await its approach, the decision made more complicated by an unclear picture of what the conflict may actually entail.
Thank you much for commenting. It's greatly appreciated.
elP