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The Maldives

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Peaches golds and different shades of oranges and blacks,

As the palm trees cast a shadow over the sky's lilacs,

The sea was completely flat,

As I watched on the beach from where I sat,

I watched the earth submerge into sky,

The sun cast a wave then said goodbye,

A bird sat amongst the palm tree leaves,

You can just make out the movement as it breathes,

This is truly a day I shall never forget,

As the day turns into the sunset. 

 

◄ Salute

Walking ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6356)

Mon 27th Jul 2009 00:46

Thanks Anthony for your kind comment and advice :),

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Anthony Emmerson

Sun 26th Jul 2009 11:44

Hi Janet,
I'm glad I'm not the only one who is inspired by lanscapes, seascapes, the colours of skies and the weather! I envy you on that beach. Nice poem - nice pic too. You might like to tidy up a few typo's in there - completely, palm, breathes - but I enjoyed it!
Regards,
A.E.

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