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early onset

around here the day often was and the night often is

and you had been inside but are outside now

with a wind-up torch and a sheer satin gown which makes you look

fabulous in the moonlight. you are

pruning the blood red roses which are the only thing

i can remember that were and are,

the petals falling to the floor without sound.

the depths of my mind were not but now are and

it is like listening to a song that never was.

◄ playing games

lord i just can't keep from crying sometimes ►

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Stu Buck

Sat 23rd Apr 2016 18:17

thanks all! i was writing some novel stuff and messed up my past and present tenses to the degree that i had to delete the whole thing and write this poem instead.

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Martin Elder

Sat 23rd Apr 2016 18:13

I have a sense of time just slowing down and the events you describe all happening in slow motion. Fabulous Stu

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raypool

Fri 22nd Apr 2016 22:21

Stunningly different and compelling Stu. The shifting of a sense of time is a great measure for this illusory state.

Ray

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