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Woodchip

Picked

And

Scratched

 

Scratched

And

Picked

 

Woodchips

Hid

 

Protective

Years

Of

Emulsion

Challenged

Me

 

Eventually

I broke

Them free

 

Inspecting

Their

Withdrawal

Balanced

On my

Tip

I gently

Flicked

 

Turning

Back to

Face

The wall

 

Scratching

And

Picking

With

No more

Woodchips

To withdraw

 

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Comments

Lynn Hamilton

Sun 1st May 2016 09:24

Thanks for reading and commenting Thomas

Lynn x

Thomas Johnson

Sat 30th Apr 2016 21:20

This is such a simple and yet vivid description. I appreciate the pleasant pace and imagery.

Lynn Hamilton

Tue 5th Apr 2016 21:03

Thanks Martin. If in doubt, cover with woodchip and paint over. I have a feeling woodchip might have a resurgence but with much bigger chips (would have great texture). x

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Martin Elder

Mon 4th Apr 2016 18:53

This a fab poem Lynn, and to think my parents loved woodchip ,it covered a multitude of uneven surfaces and anything that you wanted to hide. I have to confess that even I have used it in the past. But it was momentary lapse of judgement.!

Lynn Hamilton

Sun 3rd Apr 2016 19:29

Wood chip brings tears to eyes one way or another, Anita. Pleased yours were due to laughter. I'm going to need ladders and an industrial stripper this time! Its very fresh in my memory though, my mum going ballistic at the state of the wall at the side of my bed. I just couldn't resist! Similar feeling to snaring that out of reach crow from up your nose! Xx

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Anita Connor

Sun 3rd Apr 2016 05:33

Oh Lynn I cried laughing at this piece of torment! It took me back to the past and hours, or rather days, of doing just that! Hope there's only one wall of it!! It'll ruin your nails hun x
Anita

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