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The End

The End

The voice of hate
I've heard of late
Has sunk me down in terror

A crippled ship
I drift the depths
Of navigators error

Once bathed in light
I'm now undone
Left struggling in the dark

My memory turns
To days far gone
When the voice was of a lark

So tortured life
Now ends in strife
I gasp in vain for breath

Just left alone
Frozen to the bone
Shaking myself to death


(c)Rhumour 1974

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Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Wed 15th Jul 2009 23:39

This strikes me as being well written.
'A crippled ship
i drift the depths
of navigators error.'

Super stanza.

Janet. :-)

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