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This be the Verse..if Larkin's parents had given him more bedtime cuddles

They tuck you up, your mum and dad
They like to, and they do.
They fill you with all the love they had
And add some extra, just for you.

For they were tucked up in their turn
Wrapped up warm as a duffle coat,

And quickly given Tixilix

If tickles appeared in their tiny throat

Man hands on happiness to man.
It deepens like a coastal shelf.
So be as tactile as you can,
And don't miss any hugs yourself.

Apologies to Philip Larkin, Adrian Mitchell and other poets who have tucked up Larkin!

◄ A Career of Two Halves

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Mark Niel

Tue 14th Jul 2009 11:29

Thanks for you comments I'm glad you liked it.

Mark

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Val Cook

Tue 14th Jul 2009 08:59

How true,what we all need and want are more hugs and kisses. Good

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Chris Dawson

Tue 14th Jul 2009 08:26

Excellent stuff!
Cx

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Isobel

Mon 13th Jul 2009 23:58

Love it Mark - the humour and also the celebration of the positive.

<Deleted User> (6034)

Mon 13th Jul 2009 21:00

lovely poem! I like it a lot, a lot , a lot! thank you

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