Sherbet Lemons

Sweetness fills my senses 
As my tongue rolls around you 
Savouring your taste
Transforming

As my mouth gently engulfs your contours
Sucking
Relishing every second until 
Finally releasing your zesty finish

 

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Martin Elder

Fri 19th Feb 2016 12:31

Blimey you couldn't do that with real lemons. Nice poem Vicki

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Vicki Ayers

Mon 15th Feb 2016 23:08

Haha!! Thanks Ray I'm glad you enjoyed it! Xx

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raypool

Mon 15th Feb 2016 16:33

blimey, I just turned the thermostat down after reading this. It makes my eyes water (so does the poem).

Most enjoyable Vicki.

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Vicki Ayers

Mon 15th Feb 2016 14:47

Hehe! Yes the innuendo is intended - and I thought about titling it something like 'guilty pleasure' & putting a line in at the end about sherbet lemons .... But then decided it was more ironic to titillate the reader as they were imagining something else but knowing it was actually about sweets!! Maybe I'll rework it! And as to writing porn ..... I'll add that to my list of things to do! Thanks for your comment Wolfie xx

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