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Wind from my Window

As I draw together the curtains

on a winter afternoon

the street is gently breezy -

Disney-waltzy in 3D colour.

Over the rooftops

naked branches cast nets upon electric blue

where birds in flight ride Russian violins

in ecstatic sweeps of long slow motion.

Twigs from the giant willow

almost finger my window pane -

the tapping tambourines

of my silent orchestra -

and I am charmed.

 

Suddenly

unheralded by horns

a rogue gust

attacks the huge pine across the street

thrashing its peak wildly

like a puppy neck-wrestling a rag doll.

Overhead the sailing birds veer widely

hang suspended in mid-flight -

specimens pinned to the skyboard -

then swerve in great parabolic curves

around a shifting horizon

helpless in the fierce wind.

The pine tree seems almost wrenched

from its roots.

 

How many breaths do I draw

before the violence passes

leaving in its wake dazed birds -

like those seeking shelter

in my mammoth willow?

 

For I clearly see:

two perplexed pigeons huddled together ...

a befuddled dove tightly folded ...

a discombobulated blackbird a bit unsteady ...

a scruffy magpie straining to maintain image ...

and – yes – a ruffled robin on a lacy twig

flicking its sharp little tail furiously.

Even through glass

I  can hear the holly hedge hopping

with indignant twitters.

Our bold gulls must have taken refuge

upon canal waters.

All seems safe -

All safe.

 

And I, too,

as I close the curtains against the chill

and go to the kitchen to brew a cuppa -

not inclined to philosophize

not even a bit.

Just – make tea.

 

 

 

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Jan., 2016

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

Delaney Coyne

Fri 26th Feb 2016 22:46

I really liked this! You have so much cool imagery and it really feels like you're there too -- beautiful piece.

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 3rd Feb 2016 21:05

Cynthia,
I like the way rhe perplexed, befuddled discombobulated, scruffy, and the ruffled furious robin,
seem to be all trying to re-compose themselves after the wind

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Laura Taylor

Wed 3rd Feb 2016 13:00

Yep, I loved the mundane/crisis/mundane shifts too, and it's the kind of thing that poets do really notice. Love the image of the magpie trying to retain some dignity, and the narked robin :D Tied up with your little wry 'who, me?' line at the end, and we have one of the best things you've written for a while Cynth :) Nice one :)

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Jim Trott

Tue 2nd Feb 2016 20:57

This is brilliant.

We find ourselves shifting from the mundane drawing of the curtains to the making of the tea, and in between experiencing the sudden storm in all of its glory.

I love those shifts, and the wonderful imagery

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Stu Buck

Tue 2nd Feb 2016 20:45

this is fine indeed! the main bother i have with the winds here in the valleys are that they are so strong whenever we have them the cats refuse to go out and do their business so i end up with litter trays everywhere. anyway, such musical language and phrasing. a nice snapshot and i can see you writing it, which gives it extra charm.

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Michelle

Tue 2nd Feb 2016 12:10

Hi Cynthia, You have so much going on in this poem, all cleverly described and entwined, I love it. I especially like the "puppy neck-wrestling a rag doll", and my favourite bit "specimens pinned to the sky board" - both perfect images! M:)

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