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IN A FUNNY SORT OF WAY

In a funny sort of way I came to like him

      and then

in that funny sort of way

      I came to like others too who

I didn't much like before

      as if my liking was a fondness

for initial dislike itself

      an attachment to overcome

and once won a constant challenge

      equalled

 

then I seemed to rise up

      not caring so much whether

people suited me or not

      and forgot about myself

my likes and dislikes

      gained freedom of a sort

not needing to like or dislike anyone especially

 

      especially myself.

philosophy

◄ BEHIND THE WHEEL

WAITING WITH SAD PATIENCE ►

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raypool

Mon 9th Nov 2015 14:59

Thanks Cynthia and Stu. I'm never sure on these deeper thought poems whether they will click, they demand involvement. Stu, it can take a whole lot of time learning the hard way - I think success and fame bring more problems in self discovery . In partnerships we can project our neuroses onto our partners, and not realize. Be prepared at all times!!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 9th Nov 2015 12:46

Simply super, in attitude and poetical construction.

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Stu Buck

Sun 8th Nov 2015 15:09

so true! i was so anxious to be liked during my teens and a bit after i spent the whole time pretending to be someone i thought others would enjoy. then i realised the only people that mattered were those who liked you for who you are and not for the image you project.

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