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emma #2

Those gentle evenings

Where cherry blossoms fall

And gather in the curve of your back

Where candlelight and bergamot

Breathe softly in my ear

Where lullabies slip

From your sighing smile

And clouds sweep ebullient

Like candy floss dreams

Across your silent stare

 

Those late nights

When you are sleeping

And my thoughts are left

To dwell inside once more

Of debt and diet and

The creeping assault of time

When even the contented purr

Of the blissful feline

Ceases not the lassitude

Felt inside my bones

 

Those early mornings

When I open the window

And the soft womb beams

Of the incipient sun

Paint hope on the walls again

When you wake beside me

Smelling of rest and beauty

With porcelain skin

And china eyes

 

Those are the times

I find my cellar door.

 

 

 

 

 

also soppy

◄ emma

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Martin Elder

Wed 28th Oct 2015 22:13

I love the continuing theme you have running here Stu. a really nice picture painted here.

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raypool

Wed 28th Oct 2015 21:33

I can see the clash of the material with the spiritual and the blending compromise that comes with a great marriage. Life lived through poetry shines through and the whole thing is diffused and infused with a genuine warmth of feeling and therefore moving.
The cellar door is great, and sort of reminds me of my Sweeping the Yard where the outhouse door is a safe place.
regards -keep it coming my man. Ray

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Stu Buck

Wed 28th Oct 2015 20:01

thanks cynthia! ts eliot said that cellar door was phonetically the most beautiful sounding phrase in the english language. i guess i just wanted to liken my feelings towards my wife to his feelings for the phrase.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 28th Oct 2015 19:49

A lovely 'feel' runs through this as fine lyrical diction develops the writer's thoughts and moods. The 'cellar door' is an apt metaphor. Interestingly, IMO, it puts the writer in a specific 'place' both in geography and time. And I wondered whether 'out' or 'up' through the 'cellar door'. Not that it mattered. Or am I way off base?

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