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CHALK PIT

As I stood there on that lazy summer day

the world tilted with the sun

hawthorn privet

plantain, wild orchids

all a palette of play

on the raggedy downs.

 

I clambered down the bank

into the pit of chalk where gobbets lay

strewn,

puddled after recent rain.

 

Looking up I could see the perimeter fringed

the plunge down where the sculpture of effort

had scalloped a great signature

a wedge of fossils pressed into service

in the great death moan of watery time

with their secret offerings

from the white Gods.

 

Man had toiled here,  carts loaded

citadels of dust rose and fell

labour's dues paid.

 

On the yawning edge

a spider laterally crossed a thistle pod

a spindrift of web

criss crossed pausing

where its balance was metered out.

 

 

landscape

◄ A MINER'S RETURN HOME

OLD SETH ►

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Stu Buck

Thu 22nd Oct 2015 08:43

a wedge of fossils pressed into service

in the great death moan of watery time

damn fine.

a snapshot of mere moments enhanced by verbosity unmatched!

hurrah.

<Deleted User> (13762)

Thu 22nd Oct 2015 07:28

I don't know what part of the downs you were thinking about Ray but you reminded me of times as a child playing in the chalk pits just north of Worthing and long climbs up to Chanctonbury Ring - the hard way not the easy track the adults used to take - piling into my friend's parent's VW Beetle, so many of us, no seat belts - swinging on the ropes hung from the trees and hiding under their overhanging roots. Gosh, thanks for bringing back those lovely memories Ray - poetry works for me when that happens.

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