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Sacrifice

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                                    The Sacrifice

 

 

 

            Radio,

CQ this is………

 

This is nightshift

Where hiss and crackle –

Alien speak travel

Far across the galaxy,

     My weapon at the ready

For the automatic shoot.

     And though the quietness

Emulates an eerie tension in

The soul, my thought upon

The man now present should

Be further down the road of

Battle,

           The battle to restore a peoples home……….

◄ Mirror Man (Part Three)

Satellite Speak ►

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winston plowes

Fri 19th Jun 2009 00:56

So, we still seem to be in theatre with this one. Liked the line.. the automatic shoot. and the last line nicely indented, the battlefor peace?! Win

<Deleted User> (5646)

Thu 18th Jun 2009 13:47

Hi Mike,
these are the ones i personally can handle, in short but meaningful 'prose'. My mind builds the images slowly and can only take in so much at once which incidentally is what i receive within the text of this poem.

I enjoyed reading the Mirror Man series too.
Thanks for posting again,
Janet.x

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