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Sway

by JD DeHart

Tortoises roam in the sand
while birds spear at the shallows
We saunter on, carrying our gear

until the sky begins
to blacken
My friend tells me in other

parts of the world, they do
not fear the flashes of light
and the roar of thunder
I remember a time when I
saw them


And was not afraid, but
the sway of adulthood, of
temperance, of panic
has found me and I go
too hurriedly toward home.

◄ Lions

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 12th Oct 2015 18:04

I enjoyed this very much. And only an idiot would saunter through water in a lightening storm. IMO, braveness should not be equated with stupidity, or necessity.

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 10th Oct 2015 15:56

I like this JD - I like the title too - I like the way it moves from calm to chaos and leaves the day ruined for no real reason other than that's how it goes some days.

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