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Thursday 3rd September 2015 8:04 pm (first posted Tuesday 1st September 2015 12:51 pm)

And so to do battle

p>with the words(much easier said

than done)

for, upon their

sad reflection

they're much easier

read than won.

words and foto Tommy Carroll

Comments

Thu 3rd Sep 2015 07:20

I wasn't taking the p*** Tommy. I think your piece has an easy rhythm especially if read as only four lines. Well done.

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Wed 2nd Sep 2015 19:48

Once again Tommy I read one of your poems and think; "Damn, damn, damn! why didn't I write that?!"
(Is it 'cos I'm not a Liverpudlian?) Ledger

Wed 2nd Sep 2015 12:06

This could be Shakespeare Tommy! It has that rhyme of romeo and Juliet about it.

"too early seen unknown and known too late".

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