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And so to do battle
p>with the words(much easier saidthan done)
for, upon their
sad reflection
they're much easier
read than won.
words and foto Tommy Carroll
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<Deleted User> (8659)
Wed 2nd Sep 2015 19:48
Once again Tommy I read one of your poems and think; "Damn, damn, damn! why didn't I write that?!"
(Is it 'cos I'm not a Liverpudlian?) Ledger
This could be Shakespeare Tommy! It has that rhyme of romeo and Juliet about it.
"too early seen unknown and known too late".
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Graham Sherwood
Thu 3rd Sep 2015 07:20
I wasn't taking the p*** Tommy. I think your piece has an easy rhythm especially if read as only four lines. Well done.