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SOLUTION

Let’s touch heads

Calculate the root

Of this problem

A solution

We need to find

 

This formula

Isn’t working

It’s corrupting

My mind

 

Is my x not

Equalling your y

Have I miss placed

Your decimal point

Am I too square

To add up to much

 

Does my density

Float your boat?

Do I have to use

My push and pull

To release your

Dress code?

 

No damn lies

You’ll get from me

It’s statistically

Significant

That I could be

Your random geek

Combining elements

Resulting in colours

We can reach  

 

Let’s touch our heads  

Calculate the root

Of this problem

A Solution

We need to find

 

This formula

Isn’t working

It’s corrupting

My mind

 

Lynn Hamilton

October 2014

 

◄ No Answer

Mr Glen Coe ►

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Martin Elder

Mon 17th Aug 2015 20:18

Thought provoking stuff Lynn. Thank goodness we can't totally rely on a mathematical equation to find the answer to everything. otherwise I would have been sunk long ago. Great poem

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 15th Aug 2015 16:26

The lady doth protest too much methinks. : )

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 14th Aug 2015 13:41

If I may be so bold as to render this proposition: Your work ' Solution ' and mine ' Vertices lll ' are viewing similar events from different positions, yours 1st person and mine 3rd person. Tommy

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