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We walked with hinged smiles

Through man-made wreckage

The clawing and pawing

The desperate howls

Explosions of remorse

 

Whenever they grew close

We would blend as one

Human parentheses

Afraid of their touch

Ashamed of their needs

 

We passed through this detritus

This Verdi-Gris whisper of humanity

Until we reached sanctuary

Free of mind and memory

Warmth flooding through us

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Stu Buck

Sun 2nd Aug 2015 14:49

thanks! i read the line 'her daughters smile wears hinges' in a poem by theresa davis and it just flowed from there. its such a great image, and perfectly describes the fake smiles we plaster on our faces when prompted to by our guilt.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 2nd Aug 2015 13:43

Brilliant writing, and a viciously true topic. The first line is a master 'hook', as are the two closing lines that twist in the gut.

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