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Divorce

I could be tiny; microscopic, a dust locket,

a jungle creature past your shoes,

or a red blood cell.

 

I could be a bench press on a guitar string,

an intake of breath, teeth marks,

her wedding ring,

 

broken glass by the canal,

rusty coin or spinning top,

the chewed bone left by the dog -

 

I could be all these things.

The eyeleash you brush from her cheek,

that could be me.

 

or maybe a fingerprint or a clumsy smudge

of lipstick on a coffee mug.

And that CD that nobody claimed.

 

I could take the shape

of your pillow in the morning,

and the digital clock past midnight.

 

I could be a bank statement, a bill payment,

a cheque stub

from a forgotton engagement.

 

I could be small, so small you may not see

until after the small dotted line

has met with big decision.

◄ Thousand Yard Stare

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Comments

<Deleted User> (6315)

Fri 5th Jun 2009 21:20

hi Marianne

I could be all these things.
The eyeleash you brush from her cheek,
that could be me.

I really like this style and I thoroughly enjoyed the write but for me it ended perfectly at the above stanza! Dunno..what do you think?.. :)

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Isobel

Fri 5th Jun 2009 20:50

Yes - a great poem that 1 in 3 will relate to! I feel like writing Divorce 2 but I'm struggling so hard to forget...

<Deleted User>

Wed 3rd Jun 2009 17:05

this is a great poem x a subject that I can relate to.

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