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look see here she comes

entry picture

her arrival sends

sparkles

upward through tangles

of fibre and want

and upon arriving I

await her

unwanted departure

...maybe

she'll stay awhile

and

look to see

if she sees me

 

words and foto Tommy Carroll

◄ Calligraphy

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Comments

Lynn Hamilton

Thu 18th Jun 2015 13:13

I enjoyed the whole but those first four lines are just so.

Travis Brow

Wed 17th Jun 2015 10:15

Short and sweet Tommy, nice piece. I think it'd work as well if it ended after 'departure'

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